parallel worlds

Emptiness, space

Was there a universe?

Big Bang started all with no grace

And a humble blaze

Then the life was born in one

Parallel worlds were gone

From the minds by the wind blown

In which one day the memory was supposed to be reborn

One idea started the flow

Which will continue from now on

People had to have something to frown upon

They created theories thousand pages long

But where is the truth?

And where lies the spoof?

If we can’t answer, then let’s move

On, thankful to multiverse whatever it can prove



This poem has been submitted for Thursday Poets Rally Week 38, in which I have won the following award:
I’d like to thank SOOO much for the nomination and nominate hindawy for this week ๐Ÿ™‚

About Magdalena

I'm a positive thinker, a dreamer, a poet, a dancer, a writer. I want to empower people and inspire them to follow their dreams and create their lives exactly the way they wish them to be :)

Posted on February 16, 2011, in Poems and tagged , , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 37 Comments.

  1. the mysteries of the universe are intriguing … and baffling…
    /In which one day the memory was supposed to be reborn// loved this line
    wonderful write

  2. brilliant, thrilled to see you in the rally.


    love your spirits shown here.
    have fun!

  3. People had to have something to frown upon
    They created theories thousand pages long

    lolz !!! funny yet so true ๐Ÿ™‚ No disrespect to the theories though ๐Ÿ™‚
    Wise words here !!

  4. Yeah, it’s good to be here.

    I still like theories, though. : )

  5. Yes, there are many mysteries in this world. Part of what makes it wonderful I think. Great job!

  6. Einstein is keeping his eyes on you.

  7. multiverse whatever it can prove lol or is that the spoof?

    I like this, makes one think ๐Ÿ™‚ cool! Happy rally!

  8. Thought-provoking explanation.. ๐Ÿ™‚ Great write..

    Glad I found my way here.. you are the 14th on my list and now, I am back thinking.. ๐Ÿ˜‰

    Well, here is my write for Thursday Rally week 38 which is where I found you and hope for you visit when you have the time, thanks.. ๐Ÿ™‚


  9. I really enjoy such topics and a very nice poem to much

  10. “But where is the truth?”

    So true lol. I liked this poem very much. ๐Ÿ™‚

  11. Humans love the complication…so true.

  12. We sure do love to complicate things and get in our own way. I really enjoyed this–thank you!

  13. A great advise.. no point in working out things that are not workable…? Some times though the questions just dont go away….. it keeps nagging…;-)

    เฅ เคจเคฎเคƒ เคถเคฟเคตเคพเคฏ
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  14. loved the topic and your views . thousand pages… u r absolutely right. great one.

  15. Loved this

    But where is the truth?
    & where lies the spoof?

    Here’s mine


  16. I can identify with this. Philosophy has many questions, but sadly it doesn’t have answers… More importantly, it doesn’t have answers to the questions that human beings wonder about the most!
    I too don’t see a need for the debates we have today. All there needs to be is faith and belief which differs from person to person. I’m happy the way it is ๐Ÿ™‚
    Thanks for sharing and have a great rally!

  17. Love it! So insightful!

  18. oooh – I loved this! Interesting way to look at how we all came to be. xoxo


  19. Love it! I believe the idea of a multiverse is possible, really. Here’s mine http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com/2011/02/here-today-and-maybe-melted-tomorrow.html
    I also have a twitter, my username being MsMatsui. If you want, come follow me!

  20. Wonderful poem.. Loved it to the core..

    Someone is Special

  21. multiverse is very possible. when we seek for answers then we shall be courageous to look for them. ๐Ÿ™‚ loved the poem. ๐Ÿ™‚

  22. without that mystery, it won’t be interesting now, will it? ๐Ÿ™‚

    nice one, Magher.. thanks for dropping by mine..

  23. awesome nomination..
    well deserved award, thanks..
    hope to see you at potluck tonight.

  24. Where is the truth? Very good poem and the question very worthwhile.

  25. Thanks for the nomination Magda you’re too kind ๐Ÿ™‚

  26. Thought provoking and wonderfully written. Great poem!

  27. Well done. I love that you chose to speculate on how we evolved. Delightful!

    Happy Rally days …

  28. Thanks for sharing…


    fantastic piece.

  29. Interesting Input.Liked it!

  30. Wonderful – the truth out there , may your search be fruitful!!

  31. Makes you wonder, and I could see your train of thought as I read. Good work!

  32. Beautiful poem, I enjoyed reading. Happy Rally!

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