‘Reality in Abstraction/The Art and the World’

New city

The rock on the wall

The clock on the road

Who bites into a roll

Fights in the war

The heart is the core

Of our eternal lore

Guts may be spoiled

Clouds on the board

Drawn to explore

The art to the core

What’s gone

Will be gone

What’s wrong

Will be questioned

The world writes its words

Just how it wants

Gives new meanings to words

Borders to be withdrawn

Promises to be short

Siblings to be shot

What’s more to be born

Among artists’ dying lot?

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Poets Rally Week 39 Submission

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About Magdalena

I'm a positive thinker, a dreamer, a poet, a dancer, a writer. I want to empower people and inspire them to follow their dreams and create their lives exactly the way they wish them to be :)

Posted on March 2, 2011, in Poems and tagged , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 30 Comments.

  1. Beautiful. Especially in the use of rhyme – I’ve not come across one applying it in quite some time now.

    “Promises to be short
    Siblings to be shot”

    Love this!

  2. An enjoyable read with thoughts and rhymes 🙂

  3. Wow!
    Just, yeah, wow!
    Loved it!

  4. beautiful….

    so smooth word flow..

  5. I’m usually not a fan of poems that rhyme, but I like the usage of rhyme here

  6. Those ending in rhymes just made this whole poem more meaningful than it already is.. A great write…

    Yeah, I am glad I stop by here and have you as 5th on my list.. 🙂

    Here is mine.. and hope to see you around.. http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/03/collections-of-tings-poetry-tpmar101.html

  7. blackglassmoon

    great use of rhythm.

  8. This was amazing.

  9. The world writes its words……and the artists’ dying lot Very descriptive and things to ponder. Well written.

  10. Julian Javier the Cyber Mushroom

    nice rhyming! cool!

  11. Exploring the bitterness of this world…interesting.

  12. Shakes, rattles, and rolles doesn’t it? Nice work.

  13. Abstract is the new normality. Nice work 🙂

  14. siblings to be shot? my oh my! that’s terrible mag.. my wk 39 is here.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2009/11/17/regret/

  15. Are we a dying lot!!! 😦 sad thought…nice flow going here, happy rally!
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/

  16. Excellent poem and some very interesting thoughts in there

  17. Love the rhymes in this ! Very nice !

  18. Powerful questions. Really good flow to this one. Read off smoothly.

  19. What a beautiful rhyme Magdalena 🙂 helps with the flow so much.. wonderful.

  20. Superbly written. An insight into our murky world.

  21. The life and death of the creative soul the artists path
    “Borders to be withdrawn, Promises to be short”

    I hope there are a few children left of our dreams as of yet!

  22. Oh that was simple and profound ..

    “what’s wrong
    will be questioned ! ”

    are my fav lines !! So very true .. but sometimes , we don’t have answers for them and at times the world is not ready to listen them too ..

    Liked your poem .. Triggers so many thoughts . Layers of questions and thoughts framed beautifully in words 🙂

  23. Beautiful. I enjoy reading it…over and over again!

  24. Just wow.. Rhymed beautifully.. awesome

  25. Liked – “The heart is the core of our eternal lore”. Good job!

  26. great entry,

    welcome back any time.

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