‘Multiverse’

Feb 16

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parallel worlds

Emptiness, space

Was there a universe?

Big Bang started all with no grace

And a humble blaze

Then the life was born in one

Parallel worlds were gone

From the minds by the wind blown

In which one day the memory was supposed to be reborn

One idea started the flow

Which will continue from now on

People had to have something to frown upon

They created theories thousand pages long

But where is the truth?

And where lies the spoof?

If we can’t answer, then let’s move

On, thankful to multiverse whatever it can prove

 

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This poem has been submitted for Thursday Poets Rally Week 38, in which I have won the following award:
I’d like to thank SOOO much for the nomination and nominate hindawy for this week 🙂

About Magdalena

I'm a positive thinker, a dreamer, a poet, a dancer, a writer. I want to empower people and inspire them to follow their dreams and create their lives exactly the way they wish them to be :) Check out my YouTube channel at https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCNXQ03QibdGEy2hY3xQeldg

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  1. Rajlakshmi | February 16, 2011 at 5:35 pm

    the mysteries of the universe are intriguing … and baffling…
    /In which one day the memory was supposed to be reborn// loved this line
    wonderful write

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  2. Jingle | February 16, 2011 at 6:49 pm

    brilliant, thrilled to see you in the rally.

    cheers.

    love your spirits shown here.
    have fun!
    🙂

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  3. ladynimue | February 16, 2011 at 7:18 pm

    People had to have something to frown upon
    They created theories thousand pages long

    lolz !!! funny yet so true 🙂 No disrespect to the theories though 🙂
    Wise words here !!

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  4. thingy | February 16, 2011 at 8:18 pm

    Yeah, it’s good to be here.

    I still like theories, though. : )

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  5. thoughtsnotlost | February 16, 2011 at 9:40 pm

    Yes, there are many mysteries in this world. Part of what makes it wonderful I think. Great job!

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  6. Mike Patrick | February 16, 2011 at 10:34 pm

    Einstein is keeping his eyes on you.

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  7. Life: Between the lines | February 17, 2011 at 4:21 am

    multiverse whatever it can prove lol or is that the spoof?

    I like this, makes one think 🙂 cool! Happy rally!
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/02/16/to-spring-the-fall-must-come/

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  8. Krislin Neo, Ting (Syracuse Pike) | February 17, 2011 at 4:52 am

    Thought-provoking explanation.. 🙂 Great write..

    Glad I found my way here.. you are the 14th on my list and now, I am back thinking.. 😉

    Well, here is my write for Thursday Rally week 38 which is where I found you and hope for you visit when you have the time, thanks.. 🙂

    http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/02/collections-of-tings-poetry-tpf107.html

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  10. Kodjo Deynoo | February 17, 2011 at 8:45 am

    I really enjoy such topics and a very nice poem to much

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  11. Ina | February 17, 2011 at 2:50 pm

    “But where is the truth?”

    So true lol. I liked this poem very much. 🙂

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  12. Sam | February 17, 2011 at 6:05 pm

    Humans love the complication…so true.

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  13. Bodhirose | February 18, 2011 at 12:10 am

    We sure do love to complicate things and get in our own way. I really enjoyed this–thank you!

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  14. Shashi | February 18, 2011 at 8:35 am

    A great advise.. no point in working out things that are not workable…? Some times though the questions just dont go away….. it keeps nagging…;-)

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/01/whispers-wanderer.html
    Twitter @VerseEveryDay

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  15. BUTTERFLIES OF TIME | February 18, 2011 at 4:14 pm

    loved the topic and your views . thousand pages… u r absolutely right. great one.

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  16. hindawy | February 18, 2011 at 6:41 pm

    Loved this

    But where is the truth?
    & where lies the spoof?

    Here’s mine

    The Right

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  17. ashbeezone | February 19, 2011 at 5:05 am

    Beautiful Poetry
    Here’s mine STUFF

    The DEMOCRATIC Rap


    !! Happy Rally !!

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  18. Linn | February 19, 2011 at 7:44 am

    I can identify with this. Philosophy has many questions, but sadly it doesn’t have answers… More importantly, it doesn’t have answers to the questions that human beings wonder about the most!
    I too don’t see a need for the debates we have today. All there needs to be is faith and belief which differs from person to person. I’m happy the way it is 🙂
    Thanks for sharing and have a great rally!

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  19. blakoleander | February 19, 2011 at 1:54 pm

    Love it! So insightful!

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  20. Sherry Irvine | February 19, 2011 at 3:41 pm

    oooh – I loved this! Interesting way to look at how we all came to be. xoxo

    http://poetrybysherry.blogspot.com/2011/02/beach.html

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  21. Shigune Matsui | February 19, 2011 at 4:46 pm

    Love it! I believe the idea of a multiverse is possible, really. Here’s mine http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com/2011/02/here-today-and-maybe-melted-tomorrow.html
    I also have a twitter, my username being MsMatsui. If you want, come follow me!

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  22. Someone is Special | February 20, 2011 at 6:17 am

    Wonderful poem.. Loved it to the core..

    Someone is Special

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  23. -D | February 20, 2011 at 10:56 am

    multiverse is very possible. when we seek for answers then we shall be courageous to look for them. 🙂 loved the poem. 🙂

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  24. Leo (Leonnyes) | February 20, 2011 at 6:37 pm

    without that mystery, it won’t be interesting now, will it? 🙂

    nice one, Magher.. thanks for dropping by mine..

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  25. Jingle | February 20, 2011 at 9:22 pm

    awesome nomination..
    well deserved award, thanks..
    hope to see you at potluck tonight.
    😉

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  26. danroberson | February 21, 2011 at 2:43 am

    Where is the truth? Very good poem and the question very worthwhile.

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  27. hindawy | February 21, 2011 at 8:42 am

    Thanks for the nomination Magda you’re too kind 🙂

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  28. Silvertongue | February 23, 2011 at 2:59 am

    Thought provoking and wonderfully written. Great poem!

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  29. Jamie Dedes, all rights reserved | February 24, 2011 at 9:02 am

    Well done. I love that you chose to speculate on how we evolved. Delightful!

    Happy Rally days …

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  30. Jingle | April 13, 2011 at 4:16 am

    Thanks for sharing…

    A++

    fantastic piece.

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  31. Umamaheswari A | April 14, 2011 at 4:50 pm

    Interesting Input.Liked it!

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  32. Sajeevs blog | January 11, 2013 at 4:52 am

    Wonderful – the truth out there , may your search be fruitful!!

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  33. Mariella Hunt | January 11, 2013 at 9:44 am

    Makes you wonder, and I could see your train of thought as I read. Good work!

    Reply
  34. Janrae Mendoza | January 13, 2013 at 1:34 am

    Beautiful poem, I enjoyed reading. Happy Rally!

    Reply

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