‘Ticking Him Away’
Tick
I die
Tick
I try
Tick
I wonder why
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I smile
Tick
I cry
Tick
I find out why
Tick
He said goodbye
Tick
Oh my
Tick
Let the rain cry
Tick
Let the sun smile
Tick
Let him try
Tick
Let the blue rose die
About Magdalena
I'm a positive thinker, a dreamer, a poet, a dancer, a writer. I want to empower people and inspire them to follow their dreams and create their lives exactly the way they wish them to be :)
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Posted on August 29, 2013, in Poems and tagged blue rose, clock, creative writing, humor, life, love, pain, poem, Poems, poetry, relationships, rhyme, rhythm, tick, time. Bookmark the permalink. 2 Comments.
A novel form that worked very well for this theme – well done.
Thank you, Mike!